Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Tears

blank ,
speechless ..
these were just
EXPRESSIONS;
until his words
tumbled in my heart,
breaking the ties
I so cherished;
the molten lava
turning me into
a pool of tears

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Prompted @ OSI , Open Link Night

12 comments:

  1. "Breaking the ties I so cherished," Nimue, I could actually see it. Ain't that just like love? Your heart so steady and sure, beating to your own rhythm and then BAM! Comes love, as Billie used to sing, nothing can be done...

    So nice to read you today. Love Amy

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  2. the molten lava turning you into a pool of tears...oh wow..what an image..

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  3. you def capture the impact of those words on you...from where you were before and then after...

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  4. Hope it wasn't that hot haha great verse.

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  5. Sigh - happens to all of us.

    Beautifully put.

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  6. the molten lava turning me into a pool of tears...beautifully expressed emotion. - Kat/@beingmama

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  7. ...sadly normal to be abnormally silent in this not so rare cases of separation... ah... smiles...

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  8. Oh dear. You put it beautifully, but it's still very sad.

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  9. Poem captures the scene very well. How his words touched and hurt your deepest feelings.

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  10. the molten lava
    turning me into
    a pool of tears

    Loved the comparison you made here! Beautifully written :)

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