Wednesday, January 30, 2013

He

a love like birdsong,
found reason to be subscribed,
he rescues my pain


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This is dedicated to the love of my life ( though I doubt he will read this unless asked. and might not understand unless explained :P )

Written for Haiku Heights , Carpe diem , sunday scribblings


20 comments:

  1. I laughed at your dedication. Murphy's Law at work!
    Lovely haiku!

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  2. Lovely romantic haiku ~

    Carol of : A Creative Harbor

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  3. awwww that's so sweet... yes, my boyfriend couldn't understand a damn thing that i write either lol

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  4. Such a delicate and beautiful haiku. Hope you recite it to your love.

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  5. My spouse is the same way as the love of your life: She doesn't care a whit about what I write. Oh, well!

    Silence the Birdsong

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  6. Yes, sweet and touching.
    We writers are a bit esoteric, I guess.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  7. If only he knew what a saviour he is to you! Quietly beautiful!

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  8. I take it he hasn't subscribed to your Blog then?
    Love work, thank you for sharing :)

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    1. he has subscribed. but since i write too often , he takes a little time in reading :)
      This he has been made to read and the explanation has been asked ;)

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  9. Lovely words, but it was the dedication that made me smile! I know exactly what you mean.

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  10. Romance caught in a haiku on birdsong awesome take on today's prompt. Thank you Nimue.

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  11. the last line is deep....'He' has potential!

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  12. And my love poem to my girl friends are also unread. Very nice imagery,

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  13. Witty and engaging. Well donc.

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  14. I liked both the haiku and your quote in the end. Nice!

    Lord’s Play

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  15. Aww... this is so beautiful :-)

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  16. This is terrific... Loves your choice of words too. :-)' Following you on GFC! :-)
    Eliz

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