Monday, January 14, 2013

Death


around his death bed

the winds howl her blue feelings

paradise looks dull

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Written for Sunday Scribbling , Haiku Height , Carpe diem

16 comments:

  1. Awesome haiku, a little sad story of death and the blues intwined in it, nicely done Nimue. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. well penned haiku on 'life' ~ death is a part of life that frequently is avoided ~ Great job!

    (A Creative Harbor) on blogger ^_^

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  3. everything does pale in the 'blue' light of death....

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  4. Ah I can see a little humor in this. Even paradise is dull, that would indeed be the blues.

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  5. death never leaves without casting a shadow of gloom...lovely Haiku Nimue

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  6. Life is heaven when you can't play a harp and flirting with angels is frowned upon.

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  7. I'm 2 days away from the 1st anniversary of my aged mother's death. Yes death is a howling, but also a profoundly blessed leaving.

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  8. Great visual and I love the last line. :-)
    Eliz

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  9. I think this may be the first time I've ever heard anyone describe paradise as dull!

    Slow Death by Guinness

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  10. Magical Mystical Teacher's comment - DITTO!

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    1. when your stay is so full of love , why would you want another paradise ?

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  11. Your haiku has so much emotion in it! I could clearly see a woman crying by her love's death bed.

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