Tuesday, September 4, 2012

What beauty does





may soothe or violate
the silver orb that will hypnotise
beauty with a price ?





22 comments:

  1. I loved a touch of violation to this haiku, I never though it could be, but yes.
    I liked your take on Moon.
    Thanks for stopping by =)

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  2. Interesting take on the prompt...good one..

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  3. I agree with Viv - "clever" is the word. Very nicely-written.
    Best, Mariya Koleva
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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  4. Very interesting. Ah, but at what price?

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  5. Really interesting thought, and that image goes very well with the haiku!

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    1. thanks. i could not find your blog link. plz link next time you visit me :)

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  7. Three birds with one haiku? ;) Beautifully done.

    (I don't suppose you'd need my blog link now? ;) )

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  8. interesting...yes!

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  9. Hi Lady N :) ~~ I am thinking that most times beauty comes with its price.
    ..

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  10. Nimue, you know me, I don't give a damn about forms per se. This was a lovely slice of fantasy, and you caught the "price" of beauty question very well. It was one big "aaaaaahhhhhhhhh..." Love, Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/09/05/nurse-in-the-field-afghanistan/

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