Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Starved



constant starvation -
her love for words kept aside,
she feeds his silence.

Prompted @ September Height , OSI

18 comments:

  1. Oh how hard that is - not to be able to share your words. I like your last line "she feeds his silence" Sad though it is.

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    1. It gets very hard. and harder to break out of the shell ..

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  2. Wow, what an amazing take on this prompt! Last line is wonderful!

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  3. This is awesome. There are several different scenarios I can think of, and they are alll so sad.

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    1. Not really .. She might give her words to him :)
      Of course its hard to do even that initially!

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  4. "words kept aside" is a sad thing! Beautiful haiku, lady Nimue :-)

    Mariya Koleva
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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    1. oh yes , thats a cruel thing for words :)

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  5. She needs to quit starving herself...and write...

    Starve

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  6. What a sad haiku ... don't have the strength to find the words of love. I like the last line.

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  7. Fascinating the way we all have different angles on starvation.

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  8. To give up one love for another, that's saddening, but I give it to her, she's a sweetheart I think.

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  9. Excellent work. I too have been there. Not to share words and thoughts is painful.

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  10. Nice, L. Nimue. Sounds like a relationship on its downhill slope. Where will be the bottom?

    Jim's OSI
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