Monday, September 3, 2012

Loneliness




indexed in her sigh
color of loneliness,
he paints her blank words



24 comments:

  1. Nimue -- it is good to "see you" again. "he paints her blank words" is a great ending line for this Haiku on loneliness!!

    ~ Becca

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  2. I really like this. You paint well with your words

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  3. I like indexed in her sigh...nice one ~

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  4. indexed in her sigh is an awesome opening line! You know how to pack a punch in a few short words

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  5. Beautiful haiku written/painted with so less words ... very well done Nimue. Very strong loneliness.

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  6. he paints her blank words! friend??!
    intriguing I personally feel here is nothing better than a writer provoking us to think!

    lovely great job there!

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    1. whoa ! that was a really good compliment. thanks :)

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  7. Love the poem and look of you new blog.

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    1. yay ! so so good to see you here Martin :)

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  8. So poetic in few words...Very beautiful!

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  9. Nice! A blank canvas of loneliness ... love can add color, don't you think? :)

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  10. Such a dark dramatic haiku! Beautifully written.

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