Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Autumn






on the edge of life
she looks back at music played
the smile of spring




Prompted @ September Heights (day 5)
Inspired from the following music prompt given by Elizebth at Musical Notes Poetry prompt :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2N_tmH6y7ng


(Image source)

19 comments:

  1. Very nice I love the surprise use of sppring at the end in a haiku about autumn and memory. Very nice.

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  2. Some memories are a hope for times to be same again :)

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  3. Autumn is interconnected with reminiscence.
    I like your unusual take of Autumn with Hope.

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    1. Am on a hope and smile diagnosis ;)

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  4. Ah! This is such a wonderful haiku. Love the way you have used music to connect Autumn with Spring.

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  5. lovely interconnection..beautiful

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  6. This is lovely. I like poetry that looks at the seasons of someone's life.

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  7. A spring that makes us want to look past winter and forget it's arrival :)

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    1. not forget winter , but make it warm with old seson's memories !

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  8. Seasons whirl past like the Music Box Dancer, then fade into memory. Wonderful photo, beautiful smile and verse. You captured a great deal with few words,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/

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  9. I love what came to you from the song...wasn't it interesting with no lyrics to direct? I love these music prompts!

    ~Paula

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